旧作新译 七绝 晨醒

自娱自乐

Well, inspired by js's and yours good stuff, I try to be a copycat this time, and let you pick on me, so let you feel better,okay?hehhe
害羞弦月依山息
撩人春风入梦轻
怀春黄鹂不忍去
唤来晨曦明窗棂
I have no idea whatsoever how to do the bloody 平仄, so please lash me as much as you like.

青衫来客

hahaha, what a smart guy you are, qiuck and elegant.

青衫来客

大英汉词典---An English--Chinese Dictionary, by 外语教学与研究出版社

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-31 15:42:00 发表
大英汉词典---An English--Chinese Dictionary, by 外语教学与研究出版社

Okay, then please go and look it up in an EE dictionary and see what will come up?
I don't trust those English-Chinese dictionaries, for they are full of mistakes, unfortunately.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-31 10:54:00 发表
Morning Wake
The crescent moon moves down the hills in silence
The spring breeze sneaks into my dream on purpose

Well, one more question, does silence rhyme with purpose? :Q :P

青衫来客

Ok, if you do not prefer E-C listed above, I suggest you  find a copy of the second edtiton of Longman Modern English Dictionary by Oven Watson and turn to page---, Oh do you need me to mark the exact line and page, buddy?  With regard to rhyme between silence and porpose, please refer to be related papers.

自娱自乐

Well, yes, but it is ARCHAIC, which means people no longer use it. :Z

青衫来客

You can always find every reason to prove that you are right. Great,buddy.  However, my dic. does not say anything like it. If you do not believe, pleae come and have a look at my dic. which stands on my bookself with an inch of dust on it.

自娱自乐

what's more, it means alight and descend, another one means land on (shore)

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-31 18:11:00 发表
You can always find every reason to prove that you are right. Great,buddy.  However, my dic. does not say anything like it. If you do not believe, pleae come and have a look at my dic. which stands on......

Well, don'tbe agitated. Through debate we all learn something, right?