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童天鉴日

“绿荫不减来时路，添得黄鹂三两声。”想起了别人的诗歌，复述了一遍先。

喜欢青衫老师的这首中英文双语诗。有个疑问，总感觉“叩”字有点别扭。按照经验（当然是别人的），黄鹂这个时候应该是鸣唱而叫醒人们（理想化的）。如果黄鹂这个时候开始吃木窗子上的虫子（现实化的），则好理解。个见。

突然想起，初中时候有个同学叫黄鹂，英语说得特别好，全校名嘴呐。

青衫来客

I do like and appreciate the way of exchange between us. I feel great when I have an argument with you, because I have at least a partner to polish my rusted English, not to say you are a man of knowledge from whom I have learnt and will learn a lot .

青衫来客

问候童天斑竹。诗人的感觉是奇特的，经常也会违背常理。衔来曦景叩窗棂，实际上是一瞬间的灵感幻化的一幅拟人图画。春风入梦，晨睡正酣；娇莺秀语，人醒倏然。哦，天亮了，感觉晨光缕缕是鸟儿用口衔来的，然后编织成一片灿然。鸟儿为此歌唱，要唤醒梦中人来欣赏美丽的晨景，鸟儿也许是一个精灵和化身。叩，此处做敲击讲。另，短信告知我你的q号，我申请了一个号码。能加入你们的群，是我的荣幸！

童天鉴日

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-31 19:44:00 发表
问候童天斑竹。诗人的感觉是奇特的，经常也会违背常理。衔来曦景叩窗棂，实际上是一瞬间的灵感幻化的一幅拟人图画。春风入梦，晨睡正酣；娇莺秀语，人醒倏然。哦，天亮了，感觉晨光缕缕是鸟儿用口衔来的，然后编织成一片灿然。鸟儿为此歌唱，要唤醒梦中人来欣赏美丽的晨景，鸟儿也许是一个精灵和化身。叩，此处做敲击讲。另，短信告知我你的q号，我申请了一个号码。能加入你们的群，是我的荣幸！

恩。美景！喜欢！

青衫来客

I appreciate your reading of my poem greatly.

青衫来客

Are you fond of  the dic. I recommended to you?  And it is a real one.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-2 20:08:00 发表
Are you fond of  the dic. I recommended to you?  And it is a real one.

Do you mean this one?
Longman Modern English Dictionary by Oven Watson

青衫来客

Hahaha, you can not make it out?  Go to any dictionary to find a word of the same pronounciation and then report to me what you feel about it.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-3 10:51:00 发表
Hahaha, you can not make it out?  Go to any dictionary to find a word of the same pronounciation and then report to me your what you feel about it.

I don't quite get what you said yet.
O, I see what you want!
hehehe, no, buddy, I don't need it at all, for I know purpose doesn't rhyme with silence. Why? because silence (sailens-I can't invert that 'e') whereas purpose (pe:(r)pes), no "n", ok, so they don't rhyme with each other, despite the fact that both of them end up with s.
I am so sorry...:P

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