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青衫来客

元音字母相同的应该是什么韵啊？:Z

自娱自乐

[quote] 原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-7-12 10:35:00 发表
元音字母相同的应该是什么韵啊？原因字母相同，但一个发长音，而另一个呢则发短音，你说押不押韵啊？
brook, nook, cook, hook, look, book.....well, just name a few...

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青衫来客

如果仅是元音字母相同，读音不同，不符合全韵：如:
blood----hood; there---here; gone---alone; daughter----laughter.
这种情形被称为“眼韵”（eye rhyme），虽然诗人有时用之，但不是真正的押韵。

自娱自乐

那你的意思是....?


In Shakespear Sonnet, he used son to rhyme with noon, perhaps at that time, it might sound the same tone.

Like another one --- the  tiger by Blake

Tiger!  Tiger! burning bright
in the forest of the night
what immortal hand or eye
could frame thy fearful symmetry

eye ----symmetry -----in terms of the pronunciation nowadays, it doesn't rhyme, but as you said it is 'eye rhyme'?

Anyway, thanks for your insightful expertise in poetry, from which I have learnt a lot.

Ta

青衫来客

I am also a green hand and trying to learn more and then use it in terms of ryhme. I myself do not  know much about ryhme and just wish to have your accademic confirmation.