同题诗翻译《南乡子·登京口北固亭有怀》（辛弃疾）

自娱自乐

其实你干脆这样写

Under the sun， no heroes were his match but Cao and Liu,
A son if one has should be like Sun Zhongmou

liu - 刘 mou ---谋 押韵，呵呵呵

青衫来客

hahaha, that would be a good idea if it were in Chinese.

青衫来客

Youngster - A child (plural: children) is a human being between the stages of birth and puberty. The legal definition of "child" generally refers to a minor, otherwise known as a person younger than the age of majority. ...
I belive it is ok to use youngster here or better teenager the word used in your version.

青衫来客

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-10-8 16:40:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-10-8 15:33:00 发表
The landscape seen from Beigu Tower meets my eyes with no entry

这个太牵强了点吧？ [/quote]
Yes, a little, I have to admit it. But it makes sense in  context.

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-10-8 18:34:00 发表
Youngster - A child (plural: children) is a human being between the stages of birth and puberty. The legal definition of "child" generally refers to a minor, otherwise known as a ......

I mean A youngster rather than youngster only wiithout "a", see my point?

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-10-8 18:22:00 发表
hahaha, that would be a good idea if it were in Chinese.

Under the sun， heroes were not his match anymore
But Cao and Liu. A son if one has should be like Sun Zhongmou


这样吧, 利用你现有的词组再从新组合，你看如何？

No heroes were his match but Cao and Liu under the sun,
A boy should be like Sun Zhongmou if one can have a son.

自娱自乐

Landscape meets my eyes with no entry?

hehehe, does it make great sense?

风景没有入口处？

再则，seen --- meet my eyes 是不是有词义重复之嫌？

海外逸士

Self-amusement,  thanks for your opinion.  i'll consider about it.

自娱自乐

Not a problem at all. You are most welcome!

天路客解读：
Not a problem at all. You are almost welcome!:D

firefly, 你这样做是不是有点过分了？你看着办吧！

天路客

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-10-8 18:22:00 发表
hahaha, that would be a good idea if it were in Chinese.

it would be better if in Cantonese:P