再次赏读无心君的佳作。Inpsired by his superb version, I decided to give it try again, yet I don't know if it is ok or not to render it in this way, therefore I deeply hope Mr. Wuxingjian and others can come and shed some light upon me.
已讶衾枕冷,
复见窗户明。
夜深知雪重,
时闻折竹声。
My quilt and pillow are chilled to awake,
And find the windows unusually bright.
It must be a heavy snowfall at night,
For they can hear bamboos outside break.
My quilt and pillow are chilled to awake,
And find the window's with unusual light.
Oh, it must be a heavy snowfall at night,
For they can hear bamboos outside break.
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