【古诗英译】《望月怀远》唐·张九龄

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uprising   /'?pra?z??/
Synonyms:
noun: revolt, rebellion, insurrection, mutiny, insurgency, insurgence
uprisings plural
When there is an uprising, a group of people start fighting against the people who are in power in their country, because they want to bring about a political change. N-COUNT usu sing
Synonym rebellion;   revolt
...a popular uprising against the authoritarian government. + 'against'
Isolated attacks in the north-east of the country have now turned into a full-scale uprising.

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Sorry, my apology!

Cheers!

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原帖由 普敬天下人 于 2009-12-15 18:25:00 发表
非常感谢无心君的指导！在下修改如下。

Over ？sea the moon is uprising，
At her brightness all is gazing.
Loving ones resent the night so long,
Sitting up and in yearning so strong.
Candle is out and fuller the moon

不管怎么说，这个‘the’ 还是要的。

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原帖由 普敬天下人 于 2009-12-15 18:25:00 发表
非常感谢无心君的指导！在下修改如下。

Candle is out and fuller the moon，
Feeling clear dews,I put on robe.

要么都不押韵，像逸士所尝试的那样 - 达意为主!

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原帖由 普敬天下人 于 2009-12-15 18:25:00 发表
非常感谢无心君的指导！在下修改如下。

非常感谢无心君的指导！在下修改如下。

Over sea the moon is uprising，
At her brightness all is gazing.
Loving ones resent the night so long,
Sitting up and in yearning so strong.
Candle is out and fuller the moon，
Feeling clear dews,I put on robe.
I can’t present you ? the moonbeam,
Only seeking a date in my dream.

If only your 'present' means 'give',

present sb with sth or present sth to sb

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不用客气！

put on robe ----> a robe

candle is out and fuller the moon

it seems illogical...

Does it mean the moon wouldn't be fuller if the candle was lit?