【英文小诗】To My Angel

无心剑

To My Angel
ah, why do I love you?
is it my inevitable destiny?
you either pass me by
or haunt my dream?
I capture your graceful image,
listen to your approaching steps...
I love the style of your dress,
your tender touch can thrill me.
my garden is attracted by you,
yellow leaves have fluttered down...
when you walk across my garden,
I drown in the sorrow like a lover.
though I fear, I look forward to your call...
please stay in my world to make me complete!
Written on December 22, 2008
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O how could I not love you?
You are always fresh and new.
Like a joyfully-singing stream,
You always linger in my dream.
O my dear, I have to confess,
You stir my heart in a mess.
Only if you bestow me a kiss,
No words can tell my bliss!
Once you walk into my garden,
Many wonders would happen:
Birds sing and flowers bloom,
There's no room for my gloom!
O let me be your happy slave,
Till I go into the eternal grave!

Written on December 19, 2009

自娱自乐

摹仿十四行？
那就必须要押韵。

无心剑

呵呵，自娱兄，写时没有想到要模仿十四行，所以也没有考虑押韵之事。

自娱自乐

sonnet 不好写。
I can only enjoy it, but afraid I'd never be able to conquer it.

无心剑

呵呵，谢谢普敬兄。
用"linger"比用"haunt"好得多！
please stay in my dream to make me soar!  改得好，用"soar”好，有梦就可以高飞！

自娱自乐

Oh, why do I have to fall in love with you?
And wonder if it's my unavoidable destiny, too.
You either pass me by
Or haunt my dream, why?
Just for fun, hehehe, just a copycat...

无心剑

写十四行诗（写格律诗），着实太难，没有足够天分无法驾驭好。

无心剑

自娱兄可谓妙手回春，轻而易举就将第一节改成联韵。

自娱自乐

pass sb sth by has different meaning than 'pass by sb'

无心剑

please tell me the difference between them, Brother Self-amusement.