同题翻译笔会（古诗英译）春词 - 刘禹锡

自娱自乐

Nicely done! Enjoy it so much! And meanwhile admire vey much your unremitting effort to perfect your translation.

By the way, between 'prettify' and 'beautify', the latter seems more positive in terms of its definition than the former, I reckon.

Other than that, I would suggest let us put our hands together for Mr. Wuxinjian, hehehe

Well done!

无心剑

谢谢自娱兄，"prettify"作“搽脂抹粉”讲，好像有点贬义，不如用"beautify”。已作修改。

自娱自乐

最后一句，a rest 是不是好一点？

无心剑

“小憩一下”——have a rest，谢谢自娱兄指教，立马改正。

Newly beautified, she descends from her red room;
A yard of spring sight locks grief deep in her chest.
As she walks into the yard counting petals in bloom,
A dragonfly flutters onto her jade hairpin for a rest.

青衫来客

又欠作业一首，欣赏各位大作。

周道模

学习各位，问好各位！