【汉英双语】《古风 盼君归》（版主阅至58楼。。。）

poemhunter

问题出在英文上：颇有古色的中文配上了现代、甚至有些口语化的英文

自娱自乐

Never have I met a beauty like you,
Industrious, independent, intelligent.
No one could outshine you in my view,
Great future's in your hand diligent.

童天鉴日

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    笔法老到，果然煽情

童天鉴日

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    言之有理。如何修改？

elisa

Never have I met a beauty like you,
Industrious, independent, intelligent.
No one could outshine you ...
自娱自乐 发表于 2010-9-13 10:57

Bootlick

We don't really know how she looks like really,
How can you claim she is a beauty in reality?
Just like we've never slapped a horse's butt actually,
How d'you know a horse's bottom can be swacked?

自娱自乐

Bootlick

We don't really know how she looks like really,
How can you claim she is a beauty in re ...
elisa 发表于 2010-9-13 12:31

Elisa, dear Elisa, fie on you,
You are silly and simple in my view.
Her verse told us she's a beautiful lass,
How come you can be so dumb like an ass?

poemhunter

Poor, poor Masturbater, I laugh at you,
You are an awkward pickthank in my view.
Her verse tells us she's a poor english learner,
Whose translation's as sour as an affected mourner.

无心剑

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yeah, she really deserves this praise.
   

无心剑

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hehe, just for fun, O(∩_∩)O~

O poor, poor poemhunter,
You're a troublesome quibbler.
She's such a beautiful flower,
Yet your words are so sour.

自娱自乐

Never have I met a beauty like you,
Industrious, independent, intelligent.
No one could outshine you in my view,
Great future's in your hand diligent.
Xenophobia's somewhat exercised here,
Interestingly you and I do not care.
Neither you'll hearken nor I will hear,
Go free and enjoy the poetic air.
Each and every one likes you a lot,
Rejoicing in your poem we've sought.