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原帖由 海外逸士 于 2009-3-2 3:20:00 发表
魚與熊掌最好能兼得。不能兼得﹐應該是放棄一個。弄得熊掌半生不熟的﹐怎麼吃﹖
as if grieving在原文什麼地方﹖

Well, i can easily say 'falling',but don't like this way to rhyme. Any good suggestions?

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宛城卧龙

这么多版本哈
俺的慢慢的学习

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基本没有翻译过古文
尝试一下

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This spring is leaving for certain.
这个正在进行时态 表将来
应该改动
看诗，这个状态已经成为过去了

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leave ——我认为翻译为wane 比较好

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别时容易见时难——easy leave ,hard see
这样翻译中不中，我想起来easy come easy go
能否借用一下

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浪淘沙
To the tune of Lang Tao Sha
帘外雨潺潺，
The ripple of rain around outside the curtain
春意阑珊。
Spring has waned
罗衾不耐五更寒。
The silk quit can hardly resist cold at midnight
梦里不知身是客，
In my dream I forget that I am a guest
一晌贪欢。
with that waft of joy  

独自莫凭栏，
Alone I lean against the railing  to gaze out

无限关山。
That unlimited land
别时容易见时难。
Easy leave, hard see
流水落花春去也，
The passe spring likes fallen flowers carried away by flowing water
天上人间
In the Heavens or the world?

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自娱自乐君
这首不是 浪淘沙么
为何是 清平乐
有什么区别
这些我不懂还望赐教

自娱自乐

hehehe, Mr. Dragon, a very nice try indee, hehehe, are you having a good time?

Actually I would love to see more people try their hand at it.

Check it again, I think there are more room for improvement.