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汉译外：
沙扬娜拉
——致日本女郎
徐志摩
最是那一低头的温柔，
像一朵水莲花不胜凉风的娇羞。
道一声珍重，道一声珍重，
那一声珍重里有甜蜜的忧愁-------
沙扬娜拉！
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青衫来客译本：
Sayonara
How feminine by faint bow flashed in second
Just as a shy water lily benting in fresh wind
Take care, and take care of yourself
Her farewell intoned the sweet grief--
Sayonara！
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嘉木子译本：
Sayonara
the best is yet to faint away in that tenderness,
like water lily fronting in the breeze with shyness.
take care , Take good care of yourself,
whose adieux involved the sweet grief-------
Sayonara！
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金沙文字译本（中译俄）：
Саюнара
---Прощание с японской девушкой
Сюй Чжимо
Покуда голову опуская,нежность особая
Она,как лотос,при ветре неустойчивая
Береги,береги...!в призыве ''береги''
Моя печаль ласковая...
Саюнара!(До свидания!)
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自娱自乐译本：
Sayonara
Such a warm and gentle bow,
Like a timid water lily nods in cool breeze.
Take care; please take care of youself,
Such a farewell implies a sweet sorrow.
Sayonara
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梧桐雨丝译本：
Sayonara
What a sweet moment bending her head
Tender and lovely just as the lotus
Take care, and take care of yourself
The farewell betrayed her sweet griefs
Sayonara！
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宛城卧龙译本：
Sayonara
—to Japanese lady
Hanging your head, oh you, the softest
Like a shy water lily, bowing in cool breeze
To cry,’take care of ...’, ...once again
There is sweet grief in my bye-bye words——
Sayonara
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中诗翻译团队：
海外逸士、安城、童天鉴日、firefly、自娱自乐、金沙文字、青衫来客、嘉木子、梧桐雨丝、
周道模、宛城卧龙
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发表于 2009-3-31 12:50:00
