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发表于 2009-5-22 11:02:00 | 显示全部楼层
By the way, 'use of sth' is idiomatic, but the way you put down the words in your first version...well, it truly doesn't sound very colloquial, I am afraid,mate!

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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 12:42:00 | 显示全部楼层

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No, I have to admit when i am wrong. I know once, twice , and thrice just missed me last night.  However,  I am not the native speaker and 'people do  make mistakes ' just as  Mr. Reagon said to a report at a press conference when he was alive.
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 16:35:00 | 显示全部楼层
What is wrong for no use for long of a language?  It seems to me that  you are just being partucular.  I do not have any impulse to search for the rubbish you listed above and I am here just for fun.  No use of something is quite ok  and for long is a parenthesis, are you so blind as not to see it?  Long time no use you suggested is just like" long time no see" used only by the black , poeple who are not well educated in the states. Please put a full stop for this shit with me, I do not have enough patience and time to look into it.
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发表于 2009-5-22 17:16:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-22 16:35:00 发表
What is wrong for no use for long of a language?  It seems to me that  you are just being partucular.  I do not have any impulse to search for the rubbish you listed above and I am here just for fun.  No use of something is quite ok  and for long is a parenthesis, are you so blind as not to see it?  Long time no use you suggested is just like" long time no see" used only by the black , poeple who are not well educated in the states. Please put a full stop for this shit with me, I do not have enough patience and time to look into it.

hehehe, take it easy mate. use of sth is a set phrase, in other words they should stay together.
anyway, you have lost your temper, so finally you have showed your real face, hahaha
As for 'long time no use' I was just being sarcastic, mate!
Cheerio
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 17:29:00 | 显示全部楼层
Use of somting is a set phrase, and for long is just a parenthesis, that is what I mean. It occurs quite often in English,especially in oral English, however, why does it sounds so strange to you and make you so talktive to me just because my wrong use of a word which is only not accademic enough?  please be nice, mate.
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发表于 2009-5-22 19:01:00 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-5-22 17:29:00 发表
Use of somting is a set phrase, and for long is just a parenthesis, that is what I mean. It occurs quite often in English,especially in oral English, however, why does it sounds so strange to you and make you so talktive to me just because my wrong use of a word which is only not accademic enough?  please be nice, mate.


hehehe, talkative, heheh, Ok, forget it, mate. Let's move on...
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 20:27:00 | 显示全部楼层
Yes,great . Let us move on. I still have the home work you bloody guy asked me to do and will hand in tomorrow. Ok, buddy?  Business is business,argument is argument, mistake is mistake, attack is attack , promise is promise, friendship is friendship and home work is home work. Have nice dream instead of nightmare tonight.
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发表于 2009-5-22 20:54:00 | 显示全部楼层
嘉君加精华是对的,你不加我也会来操作的。

翻译版一直很少操作精华帖,就是因为我们大多数再交流讨论,对那些所谓“虚名”不是很在意。
不过我们以后要改正这点,因为精华代表着较为成熟的翻译。

支持!
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 22:54:00 | 显示全部楼层
谢卧龙兄!
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-5-22 23:01:00 | 显示全部楼层
I am mesmerized to feel drowsy by the rain at night
And carried away to go  to my homeland by dream flight
Where  I watch at Xiafei Road the colored lanterns
And then take a leasure pace at  Huangpujiang sands
夜雨催眠睡意浓,梦香随神故乡游。
霞飞路上观彩灯,浦江滩头慢步走。
Hi,buddy.I have done the home work requested and I do wish it would gratify you. My E is not all good as yours, so your correction and criticism is required.

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