旧作新译 七绝 雨后游山问答

青衫来客

One thousand heaps of snow brocaded on far mount't seems to be
After rain the wild peach blossoms more lushly one visitor tells me
If you wish to look on the fine scenery in the morn just come early
The rosy clouds and white flowers would vie for the better eagerly
岭遥疑蹙千堆雪，
人道山桃雨后多。
明日来看须趁早，
红霞白蕊斗婆娑。

秦腔斋主人

欣赏！

金沙文字

汉语第一句是一幅画！
喝！:beer: :beer: :beer: :beer: ..............................

青衫来客

谢秦腔兄雅鉴！但是首句翻译得不好，金沙斑竹委婉地提出了意见，我还得修改！

自娱自乐

A snow-clad hill afar it seem to be

青衫来客

写金版提携和雅鉴！

自娱自乐

呵呵呵，老青头喜欢翻quatrain, 诗情画意，就是不喝酒人也醉了。

青衫来客

I am just trying to picture the scene that there are a lot of trees of wild pitch in the hill far ahead, each looks like a heap of snow with the flowers in full bloom. Yous is an elegant expression, but the meaning would be quite different. Thank you as ever, my old lad.

青衫来客

你还是给我调点毛病，然后你也再来一版。通常我们都是这么做的，今天也不能例外。

自娱自乐

A thousand heaps 太直白了。
heaps 也许就可以了