七绝 夜宿江北山庄四首之第一首

青衫来客

You got to know 嘉木子is a university student and 周道模a teacher. What do know you about me? I am afraid you are a FBI agent .

自娱自乐

喝，喝，喝，就知道喝，喝死你..................

JS, where is your usual crapulous laugh?

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-23 8:28:00 发表
You got to know 嘉木子is a university student and 周道模a teacher. What do know you about me? I am afraid you are a FBI agent .  

呵呵呵，都是他们‘迫不及待’地要告诉人们他们是谁，又不是我特意要打听的，呵呵呵，俺向来喜欢保持低调，默默无闻，做一颗永不生锈的螺丝钉。:P

青衫来客

A new noble disc is not acceptable when you discribe the new moon. Just a crescent moon. No one would know what a new noble disc is. If you say white mica disc or plate, that is ok, because Libai had the verse" I did not know the moon in my childhood and called it the white mica plate" 儿时不识月，呼作白玉盘。

自娱自乐

原帖由 金沙文字 于 2009-6-23 8:27:00 发表
英文七绝 打造成功！

千万别嚷嚷，放一天，明天俺就把它给擦了。不然的话，三月一过，得，没戏了。哈哈哈

自娱自乐

原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-23 8:40:00 发表
A new noble disc is not acceptable when you discribe the new moon. Just a crescent moon. No one would know what a new noble disc is. If you say white mica disc, that is ok, because Libai had the verse

Yep, get rid of that 'new', just say 'noble disc', for 'new' here is a snake foot. hahaha

自娱自乐

榆影横窗似说禅，
偷行小径到江边。
一眉新月云间笑，
几点疏星水底眠。


Lodging at Jiangbei village

The elm shadows window as if tells a cryptic tale,
A dim path leading to the riverside I amble to trail.
The crescent moon smiles amid clouds in the sky,
Yet several winking stars on the riverbed they lie.

青衫来客

Too late, I have got it kept.

青衫来客

原帖由 自娱自乐 于 2009-6-23 8:45:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 青衫来客 于 2009-6-23 8:40:00 发表
A new noble disc is not acceptable when you discribe the new moon. Just a crescent moon. No one would know what a new noble disc is. If you sa......

I do not mean new here. I mean the phrase of noble disc. I am afraid that readers would not know what it is. Is this your invention or the usage adopted .

自娱自乐

I can use 'noble sickle' instead...

老前辈方重教授用过这词，至于是不是他首创，不得而知。