无心剑双语诗【酒痴】

自娱自乐

the billows toss my boat without rest,
yet who cares if I will go east or west.

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-11-7 12:02:00 发表
真的很高兴，大家不摆架子，平等切磋技艺。无心剑感觉自娱兄古诗英译蛮有味道的，挺喜欢。

再次谢谢！

自娱自乐

I call my title 'Enophile', however, I think 'wine maniac' sounds terrific.

无心剑

自娱兄，我将你的精彩译本放到主贴里。

自娱自乐

请您改一字, 改ears为can. 谢谢

无心剑

好的，马上改过来。

天路客

同意！

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-11-7 11:48:00 发表
月光冷冷地洒遍千山万水，如此凄清，不妨畅饮美酒，与长空同醉。

如果是这层含意的话，那么就不能译为 cool sth down 了

the clear and cold moonlight is upon hills?
the mighty sky gets tipsy as wine distills?

自娱自乐

Ok, give it a bit twist for fun again

My heart and mind follow Taibai to tango,
And can hear wind into the pines afar blow.
The clear but cold moonlight enshrines hills,
The mighty sky enjoys tipsy as wine distills.
Poetry immortals' ideals soar higher,
Up the wine maniac's aspiration fire.   
The billows toss my boat without rest,
Yet who gives a rap if it's east or west.


:P

无心剑

呵呵，马上更新自娱兄译本。