【古诗英译】《上邪》

自娱自乐

I wish our love would never ever die, (forgot calling the Heaven; not just "wish", but "make" or "bid")

Do we often say 'make a wish' before the birthday girl or boy blows candle(s)?

to love each other forever is nothing but a wish, right? hehehe

自娱自乐

Wuxin, let him come here...hehehe

自娱自乐

I wish our love would deepen （would deepen? subjunctive mood "wish sth would" almost means "impossible"）
Till Doomsday does happen.  （happen or come?）

heheh, that seems a good point!

自娱自乐

O, Heaven high,
I wish our love would never ever die,
Until all hills are flat and rivers dry,
It thunders in winter,
And it snows in summer,
Heaven and earth become one part,
O, then you and I 'd dare be apart.

自娱自乐

无心君，铁冰的版本不错，很欣赏。

无心剑

O Heaven!
I want our love to deepen
No matter what will happen.
Only if no ridges tower high,
All rivers run dry,
Thunder crashes in winter,
Snow flutters in summer,
Heaven and earth blend,
O I dare let our relation end!

无心剑

自娱兄，你这个译本很漂亮，语气，句子相当好！

自娱自乐

wuxin, you know what, you don't have to change it, simply change positive one into negative one, it will do.

Look, I wish our love wouldn't fail to deepen...

无心剑

谢谢自娱兄指点。

铁_冰

朕被剑兄绑架来了
再不来朕家的东西还会接二连三被搬运过来呢