【汉英双语】《译园》诗/无心剑

无心剑

hehe, actually I mean "Even nobody knows the fine fragrance takes me to the Eden, I will never gloom!"

自娱自乐

Though a small translation garden,
Laden with pretty flowers abloom.
Sweet scent takes me to the Eden,
Even nobody comes, I'll ne'er gloom.

自娱自乐

Yep, a good idea indeed!

Many thanks for that!

无心剑

自娱兄，改得妙，改后，第一句跟第二句语气更连贯，最后一句，将knows改成comes，很有意思，“你不来赏光，我才不郁闷呢！”还学会用"abloom”来代替"in bloom"，谢谢啦，老兄！

自娱自乐

No one can claim to be a perfect translator, so we all have to help each other.

You scratch my back, and I do it to yours.

自娱自乐

原帖由 无心剑 于 2009-12-24 15:54:00 发表
自娱兄，改得妙，改后，第一句跟第二句语气更连贯，最后一句，将knows改成comes，很有意思，“你不来赏光，我才不郁闷呢！”还学会用"abloom”来代替"in bloom"，谢谢啦，老兄！

hehehe, as you said the other day 'two heads are better than one.'

无心剑

It is really a great pleasure that we can help each other in this field.

自娱自乐

Small as my translation garden,
With so many nice flowers it is laden,
Fragrance washes my rusty brain,
If no one cares, I'll not be insane!

无心剑

呵呵，欣赏学习。

自娱自乐

采纳无心君的好建议，再来一版。

Small as my translation garden,
With bountiful blooms it's laden,
It sweetly cleans my rusty brain,
Even I am alone, I will still gain!