【汉英双语】《古风 盼君归》（版主阅至58楼。。。）

无心剑

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wow, so wonderful!

   

金沙文字

Ох,Маэстро!

poemhunter

O dear, dear sword,
You're indeed a blade without heart.
She's a flower,that's alright,
But beautiful only without, not within.

poemhunter

"Never have I met a beauty like you,
Industrious, independent, intelligent.
No one could outshine you in my view,
Great future's in your hand diligent.
Xenophobia's somewhat exercised here,
Interestingly you and I do not care.
Neither you'll hearken nor I will hear,
Go free and enjoy the poetic air.
Each and every one likes you a lot,
Rejoicing in your poem we've sought.  "

Your praise of her is exaggerated,
She's been here over-celebrated.
Some of her chinese poems may be fine,
But her english needs to refine.
While her chinese poems are well hatched,
Her translations of them are badly matched.
You may call her a poetic beauty,
Yet alas! she's only a lame beauty.

无心剑

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O dear, dear poemhunter,
You have made a blunder.
I care not her appearance
But her spiritual fragrance.

自娱自乐

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Yep, spot on! I agree with Wuxingjian!

Poem hunter, art thou a party pooper?
For English. the simpler, the better!
So stop thy pathetic search for nit!
Either like it or lump it!

自娱自乐

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O dear, dear poemhunter,
You have made a blunder.
I care not her appearance
But her spiritual ...
无心剑 发表于 2010-9-14 17:29

Exactly! A beauty can mean anything. A beautiful mind could be regarded as a great beauty! Thanks very much for your support.

By the way, I like your poem so much! Great job!

无心剑

To Poemhunter

You mock others without end,
Do you have any true friend?
Stop your meaningless action
To avoid wasting your passion!

自娱自乐

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    不用理会此人，没想到吃醋吃到如此地步，呵呵呵

无心剑

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呵呵，赞美一下宁馨儿也碍着他了，真是莫名其妙！